Ramblings

June 24, 2011

Snailty

Filed under: poetry — Vivek @ 3:32 pm
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Pic courtesy, google search.

 

My life so stagnant and still

I watch with fascination

And envy…………….

A snail in motion

 

- Vivek Thaokar (June 2011)

6 Comments »

  1. Hello Man of Few Words,
    You have conveyed the gist in very few words indeed. Well done. :)
    Cheers
    Woman of Too Many words.

    Comment by shail — June 24, 2011 @ 5:16 pm | Reply

  2. Good it seems you want to move…speed doesn’t matter..Cheers and increase the speed bit by bit gradually…how about tortoise??

    Comment by Asmita — June 25, 2011 @ 1:14 pm | Reply

  3. Ha my eyes have got so used to stillness that I wont be able to follow a tortoise’s motion

    Comment by Vivek — June 25, 2011 @ 1:36 pm | Reply

  4. I guess I am in between you and the snail.

    Comment by Maddy — June 26, 2011 @ 11:02 am | Reply

    • Not a very good position to be in Maddy

      Comment by Vivek — July 1, 2011 @ 10:39 am | Reply


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